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She Belongs to Me book cover


Thoughts about She Belongs to Me, a modern-day arranged marriage novel about a piano tuner (Jiang Ci) and the CEO of a jewelry company (Lu Xingxue):

For the most part, I feel like this book could have been a lot shorter and more focused. It started out really cute! But the longer you go, the more you realize there aren't any follow-throughs for any of the character moments as soon as they're completed, which was frustrating for me.

I love that both of the leads are competent, successful in their respective fields, and emotionally intelligent—they belong in the "wholesome and mature" category of romance where episode after episode of conflict is resolved quickly by a power couple. Unfortunately, these episodes don't really build up to any discernible shape, only a series of starts and stops. Scenes are perfunctory, abruptly ended as soon as their purpose is served, and there's no sense of continuity or thematicness, and consequently, no chemistry and momentum. I felt like I was reading a series of OC snippets, where I was expected to already know and ship the leads; Jiang Ci is said to be a prodigious piano tuner whose hobby is scuba diving, but you don't really see any of this affect her worldview in any way. Everything felt so artificial, including the leads' past traumas.

The character I ended up loving the most was the morally dubious second lead, Wen Nian—Jiang Ci's childhood friend and Lu Xingxue's love rival—because the author actually made the effort to set up her place in the story and bring out her complexities. She even had a full arc! The rest of the side characters were just props that disappeared, which, again, was frustrating, because I was expecting some closure about Wan Wen (Lu Xingxue's friend and lawyer), Wang Yuanyuan (Lu Xingxue's cousin), and the stepsister who appeared a lot and whose name I have now forgotten. I did like how Jiang Ci comes out of the novel with a family that wanted her and openly acknowledged her place in it.

Overall, a 2/5 read for me. I wish they'd just cut out a lot of the middle bits, to be honest. And I wanted more of piano tuner!Jiang Ci! I feel like the point made at the beginning, where students sigh dreamily about the power and precision of Jiang Ci's wrists, should have come up again haha.

Anyway, I made a vocabulary log for this book. Text-only vocabulary list with accompanying journal doodles under the cut. :)

Read more... )


Novel raws | JJWXC:
https://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=3531308

English fantranslation | Novel Updates:
https://www.novelupdates.com/series/she-belongs-to-me
Translation status: complete. Chapters 1-40 are edited machine translation, and Chapters 41–57 are (as far as I know) human translation.

Audio drama | Fanjiao:
https://s.rela.me/c/1SqTNu?album_id=387
(I subbed some clips here)
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The Favourite (宠爱, pinyin: chong'ai) is chronologically the last of Da Ying's three xuanhuan novels, which I've mentally classified as 'messy supernatural lesbians behaving very, very badly except for the protagonist, who behaves comparatively well'. The other two, which I've also read, are The Puppet Demon (傀儡妖, pinyin: kuilei yao) and Spring on the River (河上春, pinyin: he shang chun).

The Favourite begins on a ship floating on some unnamed part of some unnamed ocean, where our protagonist Qingchan lives with her two jiejie, Xisha and Duanmu (it becomes clear over the course of the novel that they're not blood-related), and their guardian Chen Niang. They survive, basically, on sex work: every month, Chen Niang steers the ship (can you steer a ship? I'm bad at nautical terms. ANYWAY) into a specific part of the ocean, and a few men board it with food and other necessaries, in exchange for sex with the two older girls. It's understood that Qingchan will also do the same work once she reaches the age of sixteen. On her birthday, however, a vast, luxuriously-appointed ship approaches them, and its owner demands Qingchan's company for the night in exchange for frankly ridiculous quantities of high-grade rice, fine fabrics and other provisions. A month later, the ship returns, and its owner, a woman whose name we later discover is Jiang Wuyou, high-handedly buys Qingchan's indenture from Chen Niang and whisks her away. 

some mid-book reveals; mention of rape, miscarriage/abortion, gore )

Despite the many plot holes, dropped plot threads, inconsistencies and not particularly effective romance, I did still enjoy this novel, in much the same way as I enjoyed the k-drama Boys Over Flowers. Structurally, it was a lot more coherent than Spring on the River, which was basically supernatural lesbians going round and round in never-ending emotional circles — at least things happened in the first half of The Favourite! I find I cut Da Ying a lot of slack, partly because I'm perennially entertained by the fact that she went from writing these books to writing She Belongs to Me (她属于我, pinyin: ta shuyu wo), a novel about two completely human women decorously resolving any relationship issues they might have through the Power of Communication, and partly because, as a very early writer (her three xuanhuan novels were first released in 2008, 2009 and 2013 respectively), it's interesting to see how she manages the affordances of both the platform and the genre (even if this is not an outright success), and to think about where her influences come from (I felt that both this novel and Spring on the River had shoujo reverse harem vibes, for instance). 

I read the Chinese original of the novel through the uncensored Taiwanese print edition published by morefate. The web version of the novel has been locked in its entirety by JJWXC for content reasons.
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她属于我 She Belongs to Me is a 57-chapter modern-day novel about a CEO (Lu Xingxue) and a piano tuner (Jiang Ci) who privately agree to be married for 5 years for family-related reasons. The novel begins in year 3 of their marriage, when they are only 2 years or a family death away from divorce but begin to see different sides of each other.

I haven't finished the book (I'm still learning to read so it's slow going lol), but so far it's been a light, tropey and nearly frictionless read where any burgeoning drama is promptly diffused by the combined maturity of both leads (with some help from Lu Xingxue's wealth) before it has the chance to play out. I still have 47 more chapters to go though, so who knows!!!

Below are some highlights from the audio drama adaptation, with English subtitles—I highly recommend the first one if you want to hear the MC's unbearably cute meowing noises.

Chapter 2 scene - in which drunk!Jiang Ci is scratching at the carpet and Lu Xingxue discovers that she married a cat:


Chapter 10 lipstick scene:

PS. My Chinese isn't that great, so corrections are OK! I mostly referred to the novel text to translate these.


If you're interested in this canon, here are the relevant links:

Novel raws | JJWXC:
https://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=3531308

Audio drama | Fanjiao:
https://s.rela.me/c/1SqTNu?album_id=387

English fantranslation | Novel Updates:
https://www.novelupdates.com/series/she-belongs-to-me
Translation status: complete. Chapter 1-40 is edited MTL; not sure about the rest
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I read 22 baihe novels (and one collection of baihe-adjacent short stories) this year, out of a total of 77 books read (including playtexts and graphic novels). Here's the full list, in order of when I read them.



So looking back, I think I've managed to catch up on some pretty classic and popular novels, mixed in with some more niche titles from subgenres I wouldn't typically be super drawn to. For 2024, I'm especially keen to read more work from Ning Yuan and Liu Yuan Chang Ning, and maybe Ruo Hua Ci Shu (despite her letting me down so terribly with the ending to Minister Xie). In fact, I'm slightly toying with the idea of making my way through as much of Ning Yuan's back catalogue as possible over the coming year, maybe at the rate of one Ning Yuan novel per every three baihe novels I read. I'm also interested in reading at least one more each by Yu Shuang and Qing Tang Shuan Xiang Cai, as I found their books unexpectedly enjoyable.
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I read Waiting for You (余情可待, pinyin: yuqing kedai) more out of a sense that this was a book I ought to read — Min Ran's massive popularity as an author; this novel's massive popularity with the fanbase; the popularity of showbiz romance (of which I had only properly read one very atypical example) as a subgenre among baihe readers generally — rather than any feeling that I would actually enjoy it. As it turned out, I was right: I did not enjoy the novel, although I can perhaps see how it might work for readers who don't have my particular preferences.

The plot of Waiting for You is essentially exes-turned-reunited-lovers courtesy of a handy rebirth and time rewind. The main characters are Ji Youyan, a TV actress who'd been toiling in the mines for some time before finally winning a major acting award and achieving acclaim, and Jing Xiu, a legit major movie star. They met during an idol audition programme, and dated for two years after that before breaking up. At the start of the novel, they've been broken up for five years. Jing Xiu is at her own literal wedding ceremony (to a university classmate of hers, a man named Song Wenyan) when she hears the news that Ji Youyan has died from alcohol poisoning. She abandons her wedding and rushes to Ji Youyan's side, but too late. Then Ji Youyan finds herself waking up, reborn at an earlier point in time — just two years after she broke up with Jing Xiu. She's determined to make amends and win her ex-girlfriend back again, starting with taking part in an acting-focused reality show she and Jing Xiu have both been invited to be judges on.

Read more; I tried to avoid detailed/major spoilers )

Somewhat more spoilery bit about the reason for Ji Youyan's rebirth )

So, in short, I did not enjoy this novel and it frustrated me in a number of ways. However, I can see how it would appeal to readers who are after a sort of mostly wish-fulfilment, low-conflict story, with generally good (though not remarkable) prose and characters who are mostly likable (Ji Youyan can be quite entertaining, especially when she's teasing Jing Xiu, or bantering with her assistant, wide-eyed, bad-at-getting-innuendos Lin Yue). Readers who are invested in the social media and celebrity/fan interactions aspects of the entertainment industry will also probably get a lot more out of this novel than I did. I still plan to read Min Ran's other massively popular novel, the age gap romance For the Rest of Our Lives (余生为期, pinyin: yusheng weiqi), but I'm in no real hurry.

I read the Chinese original of the novel on JJWXC here. I'm aware of an English fan translation floating around on the internet, but since quite a lot of is MTL, I will not be dignifying it with a link.

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