Note: I'll try to catch up a little but will probably be a few days behind the actual chapter updates from now on, especially since she's going to drop about 10k words when the novel goes into VIP.
Shen Ni pulling out Liu Ji's jade core like 'well I'm already dirty, may as well DISEMBOWEL'. I love her.
I also love how the narrative basically pauses at the end of the fight to establish how hot Shen Ni looks while she's covered in blood. Honestly, fair.
And her then turning to Madam Liu and going 'I just came to buy flowers, can I buy these now?' Iconic.
Something something Bian Jin staring at the broken snowglobe, something something Shen Ni washing her hands over and over before touching the flowers, something something
Being completely in another person’s grasp frustrates Bian Jin, and also gives her other Feelings that she can’t quite explain oh I am Looking at that 互攻 tag...
Loose strands of black hair fell across [Shen Ni's] eyes; all traces of tidiness, indolence, and charm were gone, replaced by something dark and sinister (lazy tl is lazy but) ohhhh this is a Look!!!
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baihe_media2024-06-23 09:25 pm
Re: Chapter 16
Shen Ni pulling out Liu Ji's jade core like 'well I'm already dirty, may as well DISEMBOWEL'. I love her.
I also love how the narrative basically pauses at the end of the fight to establish how hot Shen Ni looks while she's covered in blood. Honestly, fair.
And her then turning to Madam Liu and going 'I just came to buy flowers, can I buy these now?' Iconic.
Something something Bian Jin staring at the broken snowglobe, something something Shen Ni washing her hands over and over before touching the flowers, something something
Being completely in another person’s grasp frustrates Bian Jin, and also gives her other Feelings that she can’t quite explain oh I am Looking at that 互攻 tag...
Loose strands of black hair fell across [Shen Ni's] eyes; all traces of tidiness, indolence, and charm were gone, replaced by something dark and sinister (lazy tl is lazy but) ohhhh this is a Look!!!