Discussion of Chapters 1 to 10 can be found
here.
The link to the novel on JJWXC is
here.
Note: I'll try to catch up a little but will probably be a few days behind the actual chapter updates from now on, especially since she's going to drop about 10k words when the novel goes into VIP.
Re: Chapter 14
Willing to bet dark web levels of money that this is the first time anyone has ever compared Bian Jin to a newborn fawn.
As Bian Jin is washing her face, she notices the cut across her palm. She frowns at it briefly, her thoughts wandering
Does Bian Jin... maybe not remember how this happened? Or am I reading too much into it.
This was also why Li Ruoyuan commissioned the Great Wheel of Fire
I still think something is UP with this Eye of Sauron thing.
Shen Ni used to stare at it, lost in thought — perhaps of her parents, who had disappeared
Hmmmmm.
Bian Jin is about to call out to her when she sees another young woman rush up to Shen Ni and embrace her happily
Ah yes. Classic romantic misunderstanding.