Wow, what a trip reading that summary was. (I'm having a particularly hard time typing with an incorrectly wrapped band aid on my finger ... who knew peelers could be so sharp!?!).
Did not imagine Shen Ni to be so audacious but alas, at the end, nothing salacious happened. Dang. hahah I want a lot more of these instances. Nothing like a slow buildup to get a nice explosion somewhere down the line. teehee Slowly then suddenly.
I was unclear about how they were viewing the chat, too. Sometimes, it's difficult to picture these futuresque settings.
Since I can't read the original myself, I'll have to continue wondering if your summaries are even better than the story itself. I would not be surprised if it was. Also, I'm embarrassed to admit I sometimes have to look up the definition of some of the words you use. HA HA he
Re: Chapter 5
Wow, what a trip reading that summary was. (I'm having a particularly hard time typing with an incorrectly wrapped band aid on my finger ... who knew peelers could be so sharp!?!).
Did not imagine Shen Ni to be so audacious but alas, at the end, nothing salacious happened. Dang. hahah I want a lot more of these instances. Nothing like a slow buildup to get a nice explosion somewhere down the line. teehee Slowly then suddenly.
I was unclear about how they were viewing the chat, too. Sometimes, it's difficult to picture these futuresque settings.
Since I can't read the original myself, I'll have to continue wondering if your summaries are even better than the story itself. I would not be surprised if it was. Also, I'm embarrassed to admit I sometimes have to look up the definition of some of the words you use. HA HA he